The Toltec Arts

Five people
In an open room
Three conspirators
A secretary
Two lawyers
A witch laughs
Next to Death
Fanged heat
For the three
Do not know
He is here
Just for her
To tempt her
Red stem pours
Lust and magic
Flowing into fate
Now three are prey
Into the hall of terror
Into the cold and lassitude
Everyone is loved
By someone

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Comments on: "She Wants To Live and She Swears" (24)

  1. Hmmm…I’m having trouble understanding.
    I see it as an observation of the malignant forces that interfere with out daily lives, but us living on in spite of it. What did you mean?

    • Yeah – I get the confusion. This was an exercise for plotting. Stream of consciousness thing in reaction to the mood of the song. The witch shows up to a party along with her enemies who are pretending to be her friends. Witch knows what they are and laughs because a lover of hers, a vamp, shows up.
      I doubt I’d do anything with it, but it was still a fun way to start thinking about a new book, even though what I came up with was trite.

  2. I don’t think this is trite at all. Maybe because I work for attorneys as my “day job”? Oh, and it’s for a family law attorney. This poem is perfect! I’m sure that’s not quite what you were going for, but I really like it.

  3. Thank you very kindly for joining us at wePoets, it’s much appreciated. We would be happy to showcase your work should you want to share. πŸ™‚ Beautiful poem.

  4. One thing I don’t have for sure is the talent to write and understand poetry. I read this twice and still find it hard to understand but I really love every line of it πŸ™‚

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